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Submitted: September 5, 2011
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Short Hair?by ~IceValaxy

Manga & Anime / Digital Media / Drawings

Heeey it's not something Halloween-y! It's even school related! For SEPTEMBER! /slapped _{Okay, I'll stop >u>}

Umm xD Idk xD MORE lighting practice? xD Like first I didn't really think of the light source you know...heh, I just figured something sunset ish. But light has to come from somewhere >w>;; So I just put random ~~derpy~~ lanterns xD

Oh yeah, and I'm letting critiques again ^^ Critiques really help :3 If they're not cruel, you know.

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Critique by *JadeLaunders Sep 5, 2011, 2:34:43 PM

Wow, I really see you took my critique to heart! It really shows too, I DEFINITELY see improvement here : >
Again, the lighting is really nice, not much to say about it. Seems good to me.
The anatomy seems nice too, however her right arm seems a little but longer than the other, it's not too noticable or anything though lol.
I can see that you've definately tried to put more of an effort into the shading, and I really commend you for trying, seriously, good on you! It could have more folds in it, but again, with more practice I'm sure that will come in time, it's really good to see your making an effort, it looks much nicer than usual (the shading that is) : >
The hair looks MUCH better, you shaded it very nicely and it has much more shape to it! Good job, it looks very, very nice.
The lanterns look very lovely too. You did a great job on the athmosphere.
All in all, good job, you just need to keep studying folds and your art will improve a tenfold. Keep it up and you'll improve a lot in no time, I know you can do it~

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